Alternatives to going to circuses near animal act - 10 PTS for best answer! Help!?

So I wrote this article so people would I don`t know stop going to circuses because they're kinda cruel to animals... but the people reading it don't give the impression of being to agree - can anyone tell me some better design?

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Answers: I thought your article was excellent and doesn't want any further revision. You made valid points and supported them and gave honest alternatives to going to a circus. Circuses are cruel and the training methods are horrible. You may want to touch further on why they are cruel and pull up some documented facts on assault.
Go to nearest pet shelter they let you look at pets for free and they are not cruel to them at adjectives


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